A Look Into A Pitch III
Now its time for a much needed filler. I'm going to go in depth of how I'd like two of my characters to be Structured from my third pitch. Today I'll be writing about the main character Ryo and his brother Marc.
Ryo, as I mentioned before he's living a tough life in a society that doesn't accept him. He's about the last (literally) nice guy on the face of the U.S. He's kind, honest, sincre and honorable. Recently he's been trying to hang onto the last friends he has from jr high. This young man has many enemies, either by simply walking into drug or weapon deals in his classes accidently. If you've ever watched Trigun Vash's body is covered with scars. So is Ryo's body. His personality is much like Vash and Kenshin. He's also a guy who can still smile even though he holds personal anguish.
To give you a view into a day in the life of Ryo, it starts by waking up at seven in the morning to a dull grey day (man has finally depleted the ozone lair to the most minimal percent of protection so an artificial cloud covering covers the sky constantly) eats breakfast and goes to Crescent High. Before entering he must enter metal detectors followed by a pat down by heavily armed guards for weapons. Public schools like Crescent have become maximum security campuses. This is due to the recent increase in youth crime. Despite the weapons search, thousands of teens manage to bring knives and guns to school. The districts have just stopped caring since too much is going on in the schools to handle.
The character Marc is a very interesting one to develope. Marc is much like Ryo, except he is much stronger and confident in himself. He was the champion of Crescent High's fight club. He's a strong character, due to the fact that in his soul resides the soul of a master fighter who mastered every single fighting style. However Marc is also the sole sucessor of a fighting style just developed, it is called the Blitz style. For those of you who played Final Fantasy VI, that's Sabin's style. His moves will be inspired by the blitz moves that could be inputed, his ultimate attack the Bum Rush.
These two brothers share the same relationship as me and my brother do. They laugh together, talk, and take care of each other while their mother recovers. Marc is someone Ryo can look up to and talk to whenever he's down. Marc takes care of Ryo and helps him in his bounty operations as support.
Well these are only two of the many characters I have in mind for this pitch. Next time I'll write about the demon that resides in Ryo and Ryo's love interest. So until then keep reading.
Ryo, as I mentioned before he's living a tough life in a society that doesn't accept him. He's about the last (literally) nice guy on the face of the U.S. He's kind, honest, sincre and honorable. Recently he's been trying to hang onto the last friends he has from jr high. This young man has many enemies, either by simply walking into drug or weapon deals in his classes accidently. If you've ever watched Trigun Vash's body is covered with scars. So is Ryo's body. His personality is much like Vash and Kenshin. He's also a guy who can still smile even though he holds personal anguish.
To give you a view into a day in the life of Ryo, it starts by waking up at seven in the morning to a dull grey day (man has finally depleted the ozone lair to the most minimal percent of protection so an artificial cloud covering covers the sky constantly) eats breakfast and goes to Crescent High. Before entering he must enter metal detectors followed by a pat down by heavily armed guards for weapons. Public schools like Crescent have become maximum security campuses. This is due to the recent increase in youth crime. Despite the weapons search, thousands of teens manage to bring knives and guns to school. The districts have just stopped caring since too much is going on in the schools to handle.
The character Marc is a very interesting one to develope. Marc is much like Ryo, except he is much stronger and confident in himself. He was the champion of Crescent High's fight club. He's a strong character, due to the fact that in his soul resides the soul of a master fighter who mastered every single fighting style. However Marc is also the sole sucessor of a fighting style just developed, it is called the Blitz style. For those of you who played Final Fantasy VI, that's Sabin's style. His moves will be inspired by the blitz moves that could be inputed, his ultimate attack the Bum Rush.
These two brothers share the same relationship as me and my brother do. They laugh together, talk, and take care of each other while their mother recovers. Marc is someone Ryo can look up to and talk to whenever he's down. Marc takes care of Ryo and helps him in his bounty operations as support.
Well these are only two of the many characters I have in mind for this pitch. Next time I'll write about the demon that resides in Ryo and Ryo's love interest. So until then keep reading.
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