Last Look Into A Pitch III (for a while anyways)
OK, I know I promised that there wouldn't be any more looks, I lied. I just love this pitch idea so much. The only bad thing is that if someone sees this and steals it I'm not going to get any credit for it. Alas so is the will of the world. with that said here is an actual look into a fight scene.
Both Ryo and Marc are captured by a mercenary that was hired by Ryo's old friends (Ryo captures them all and sends them to jail) to kidnap their still recovering mother and kill Ryo. The merc is a highly skilled soldier known for killing an S ranked bounty hunter.To crush Ryo's spirit the merc sends Marc to the most vicious pit fighting ring in L.A and forces Ryo to watch. There, the specators prep Marc for what would seem to be his last fight. They find various weights and wires going around his body. "Dude this guy is some kind of freaky robot" one onlooker says. The weights are for show, they only weigh about ten pounds. The real twist are the wires; they're strength inhibitors linked to the weights. They control the amount of strength that Marc can use. They are set to zero, normally the body only uses 60 percent of the muscles strength, the inhibitors cause Marc to only use 0 percent of his strength.
Marc is to face the reigning champ of the ring, in an inescapable cage match. The first blow is delt by the champ, Marc falls to his knees and the crowd roars. Marc gets up and delivers a seemingly slow punch. The champ is blown across the ring. Marc looks around the crowd booing him, sets the inhibitors to 60 and removes the weights. The next two challengers face him, Marc throws the weights at them and defeats them both with Jeet Kune Do style. Soon the fighters rush in, the crowd throwing weapons into the ring. This part is where we see how Marc has developed his Blitz style. You'll see Fire Dance (very fast), Pummel, Suplex, Air Blade (a unique attack). The fighters will pick up weapons and try to attack but to no avail. One guy gets it when Marc knocks out a guy with a bottle and while its still in the air he smashes it sending shards into the face of the next person coming at him.Eventually the Merc offers 900 million credits to the person that defeats Marc. Then everyone in the crowd rushes in to the ring to fight. It'll be a hectic fight but Marc can handle anything. Who will win? Lets just say that the L.A. hospitals will be too full to take in all of them.
Well it was fun getting this out, I'm going to take more looks into this pitch in the future. Still have some generals I haven't talked about yet and another one of Ryo's friends that aid him in his fight. So until then keep reading.
Both Ryo and Marc are captured by a mercenary that was hired by Ryo's old friends (Ryo captures them all and sends them to jail) to kidnap their still recovering mother and kill Ryo. The merc is a highly skilled soldier known for killing an S ranked bounty hunter.To crush Ryo's spirit the merc sends Marc to the most vicious pit fighting ring in L.A and forces Ryo to watch. There, the specators prep Marc for what would seem to be his last fight. They find various weights and wires going around his body. "Dude this guy is some kind of freaky robot" one onlooker says. The weights are for show, they only weigh about ten pounds. The real twist are the wires; they're strength inhibitors linked to the weights. They control the amount of strength that Marc can use. They are set to zero, normally the body only uses 60 percent of the muscles strength, the inhibitors cause Marc to only use 0 percent of his strength.
Marc is to face the reigning champ of the ring, in an inescapable cage match. The first blow is delt by the champ, Marc falls to his knees and the crowd roars. Marc gets up and delivers a seemingly slow punch. The champ is blown across the ring. Marc looks around the crowd booing him, sets the inhibitors to 60 and removes the weights. The next two challengers face him, Marc throws the weights at them and defeats them both with Jeet Kune Do style. Soon the fighters rush in, the crowd throwing weapons into the ring. This part is where we see how Marc has developed his Blitz style. You'll see Fire Dance (very fast), Pummel, Suplex, Air Blade (a unique attack). The fighters will pick up weapons and try to attack but to no avail. One guy gets it when Marc knocks out a guy with a bottle and while its still in the air he smashes it sending shards into the face of the next person coming at him.Eventually the Merc offers 900 million credits to the person that defeats Marc. Then everyone in the crowd rushes in to the ring to fight. It'll be a hectic fight but Marc can handle anything. Who will win? Lets just say that the L.A. hospitals will be too full to take in all of them.
Well it was fun getting this out, I'm going to take more looks into this pitch in the future. Still have some generals I haven't talked about yet and another one of Ryo's friends that aid him in his fight. So until then keep reading.
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